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Analyse how Buddhism in Tibet responded to Chinese rule in the 1950s.
The People's Liberation Army entered Tibet in 1950, and the Seventeen Point Agreement followed in 1951. After the uprising of 1949, the 14th Dalai Lama fled Lhasa for India, and Tibetan Buddhism was carried on in exile from Dharamsala.
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25 marksInvestigate and analyse the ways Buddhism had interacted with Tibet during China's occupation during 1950s-1960s. Evaluate and draw conclusions about this interaction and its influence on shaping society's response during this time.
Response
The Dalai Lama states in his autobiography, My Land and My People that, "For many Tibetans material life was hard, but they were not the victims of desire; and in simplicity and poverty among our mountains, perhaps there was more peace of mind than there is in most of the cities of the world." (XIV, 1998). Religion has always played a significant role in the nation of Tibet. Bon religion had been the leading religion before the advent of Buddhism, as it was widespread in the land and had been a primal force which nourished, the culture, language and identity of the region (Arya, 2016). It was not until King Songsten Gampo, who ruled from 609 to 650 CE, brought Buddhism into Tibet facilitated by the influence of his two wives (Ganeri, 2007). Becoming the official state religion in Tibet during the eighth century, Buddhism religion is a part of many aspects of Tibetan life. So due to its geographical isolation, Tibet remained mostly untouched by secular influences for many years, and therefore the cultural and political life was largely centred on that faith. It was a country of its own, with its own language, flag, and currency, The Dalai lama who is considered a reincarnation of an enlightened being from Buddhist teachings, acted as a spiritual and political leader for the people. (Stock, 2014). This changed in the 1950s, when Chinese communists invaded Tibet. The Dalai Lama signed a 17-point agreement, which allowed China to control Tibet's internal security and foreign policy while the Lhasa government, led by the Dalai lama, controlled domestic matters (Heinrichs, 1997). However, this agreement ultimately served as a way Chinese took full control of Tibet. Hence, the Chinese occupation of Tibet significantly influenced, individual lives but also religious state relationship within Tibetan society. When the republic of China was established in 1912, it introduced its first constitution, which explicitly stated that Tibet was one of its 22 provinces. The constitution and other laws formulated after, all stipulate that Tibet was a part of the Republic of China. (Embassy of the People's Republic of China in the Republic of South Africa, 2009). However, until Chinese troops entered the country in 1949, Tibet "governed itself without foreign influence, conducted its own foreign affairs, had its own army and operated its own postal system. Tibet enjoyed de facto recognition by its neighbour states as well as by Great Britain, with whom Tibet entered into a series of treaties regarding travel and trade". ( Canada Tibet Committee, 2021). This situation changed after Chinese invasion in 1950, forcing the 17-point agreement on the Tibetans on the 23 May 1951. (Kelly, 1999). "The argument meant that the Chinese would control Tibet's internal security and foreign policy, while the Lhasa government under the Dalai lama would largely control domestic matters." (Ryan, 2009). Following the agreement, the nation of Tibet was significantly affected as Chinese influence grew over the region. When Buddhism became the dominant religion in Tibet and the people had religious freedom, approximately two-thirds of the population were monastic, living in numerous monasteries and nunneries, some of which housed thousands of monks. Most families sent at least one child to the monasteries, which provided a traditional way of life. "Lay people either lived in towns and small villages or lived as wandering nomads who grazed their livestock. Buddhism was integral to their lifestyle too, and many lay people were deeply religious." (Farrer-Halls, 1998). In an account by author Lowell Thomas Jr about his journey to the Dalai Lamas throne in Lhasa states that "Every Tibetan prays. Even five-year-old children commit long prayers to memory. The Monk prays hours on end daily, but the layman, too, often devotes two or three hours each day to prayer and meditation" (Jr, 1951). The 7th point in the agreement specifically, states that "The religious beliefs, customs and habits of the Tibetan people shall be respected, and lama monasteries shall be protected." (Central Tibetan Administration, 2019). However, this promise by China was not fulfilled but rather violated as, within a few years, the Chinese government effectively ended the dominance of monks and monasteries in Tibet. Thousands of monks were executed of arrested, and monasteries and temples across the nation were looted or destroyed. Of the 2,500 monasteries that existed in 1959 only 70 remained by 1962. A 97 percent reduction in less than three years. (Schaik, 2013). These Buddhist monasteries were essential components of Tibetan villages and where homes to a quarter of the population (Farrer-Halls, 1998), and vital institutions within Tibetan pastoral regions. (Samuel, 2012). They functioned as "universities, art museums, charitable foundations, landlords, and lending institutions." (Heinrichs, 1997) The destruction of these institutions hindered the teachings of Buddhist teachings and practices, leading to significant losses in education, cultural and spiritual aspects that were important to Tibetan society. In 1950s the Chinese then implemented schools "in central Tibet, both in cities and in rural areas. In Lhasa, the first state school was established in 1952. The teaching was in Tibetan, but the content was heavily influenced by Chinese communist propaganda" (Buffetrille & Tourbadre, 2022). This change in education likely led to younger people having different beliefs and practices. The Chinese government control over education could have helped them to control the population by spreading their communist ideology. The schools changed how Buddhism was understand and practised which also affecting society as a whole in Tibet.
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Demonstrating understanding
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-/7Evaluating and drawing conclusions
-/7Considering, organising and creating
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| Criteria description | 0 | 1-2 | 3-4 | 5-6 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
Explaining: Features & Teachings | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | limited identification of the features of one religious tradition and its teachings in relation to the nation–state in a particular context | relevant identification of the distinguishing features of one religious tradition and its teachings in relation to the nation–state in a particular context | comprehensive and relevant identification of the distinguishing features of one religious tradition and its teachings in relation to the nation–state in a particular context |
Explaining: Characteristics | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | basic description of characteristics of one religious tradition and the way it informs a response to the nation–state in a particular context | description of characteristics of one religious tradition and the way it informs a response to the nation–state in a particular context | thorough and detailed description of characteristics of one religious tradition and the way it informs a response to the nation–state in a particular context |
Explaining: Religious Expression | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | simplistic explanation of the ways one religious tradition is expressed in response to the nation–state in a particular context | explanation of the ways one religious tradition is expressed in response to the nation–state in a particular context | accurate explanation of the ways one religious tradition is expressed in response to the nation–state in a particular context |
0 | 1 | 2-3 | 4-5 | 6-7 | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
Analysing: Source Selection | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | limited selection and use of information from religious texts or other authoritative sources to inform analysis of perspectives about religious expression | selection and use of information from religious texts and/or other authoritative sources to inform analysis of perspectives about religious expression within one religious tradition | considered selection and use of relevant information from religious texts and other authoritative sources to inform analysis of perspectives about religious expression within one religious tradition | critical selection and appropriate use of relevant information from religious texts and other authoritative sources to inform analysis of perspectives about religious expression within one religious tradition |
Analysing: Beliefs & Practices | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | simplistic or erroneous statements about beliefs and/or practices within one religious tradition that influence the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected | some explanation of beliefs and practices within one religious tradition that influence the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected | explanation of beliefs and practices within one religious tradition that influence the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected | detailed and accurate explanation of distinct beliefs and practices within one religious tradition that influence the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected |
Analysing: Perspectives | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | one or more statements on a perspective within one religious tradition related to the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected | basic examination of perspectives within one religious tradition that influence responses to the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected | examination of perspectives within one religious tradition that influence responses to the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected | thorough examination of perspectives within one religious tradition that influence responses to the religion’s interaction with the nation–state in the context selected |
Evaluating: Synthesis | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | one or more statements are made about a religion–state relationship | some synthesis of ideas about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state and the extent it has shaped society’s response within a particular context | considered synthesis of ideas about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state and the extent it has shaped society’s response within a particular context | thorough and succinct synthesis of ideas about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state and the extent it has shaped society’s response within a particular context |
Evaluating: Judgments | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | simplistic and/or erroneous judgments about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state in shaping society’s response within the context selected | basic judgments about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state in shaping society’s response within the context selected | appropriate judgments about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state in shaping society’s response within the context selected | discerning and astute judgments about the influence of religion and its interaction with the nation–state in shaping society’s response within the context selected |
Evaluating: Justification | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | inaccurate and/or irrelevant justification | limited justification of judgments supported with reasoning and/or evidence | justification of judgments supported with reasoning and/or evidence | detailed justification of judgments supported with reasoning and evidence |
0 | 1 | 2-3 | 4-5 | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
Communicating: Language & Structure | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | some use of religious language, with ideas related to a hypothesis and features of an essay | appropriate choice of religious language, development of ideas suitable for the analytical essay genre, including creation of hypothesis | accurate choice of religious language, logical, cohesive and succinct development of ideas suitable for the analytical essay genre, including creation of hypothesis |
Communicating: Conventions | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | limited application of language conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) | application of language conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) | consistently appropriate application of language conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) |
Communicating: Referencing | The student response does not satisfy any of the descriptors above. | limited acknowledgment of sources | acknowledgment of sources using a system of referencing | consistent identification and acknowledgment of sources, accurately using a recognised/prescribed system of referencing |
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Question 3 · 4 marksFind the stationary points of f(x) = x³ − 6x² + 9x + 1 and determine their nature.
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- Finds f′(x) and solves f′(x) = 01
- Finds both stationary points1
- Determines the nature of each point with a test2
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25 marksInvestigate and analyse the ways Buddhism had interacted with Tibet during China's occupation during 1950s-1960s. Evaluate and draw conclusions about this interaction and its influence on shaping society's response during this time.
Response
The Dalai Lama states in his autobiography, My Land and My People that, "For many Tibetans material life was hard, but they were not the victims of desire; and in simplicity and poverty among our mountains, perhaps there was more peace of mind than there is in most of the cities of the world." (XIV, 1998). Religion has always played a significant role in the nation of Tibet. Bon religion had been the leading religion before the advent of Buddhism, as it was widespread in the land and had been a primal force which nourished, the culture, language and identity of the region (Arya, 2016). It was not until King Songsten Gampo, who ruled from 609 to 650 CE, brought Buddhism into Tibet facilitated by the influence of his two wives (Ganeri, 2007). Becoming the official state religion in Tibet during the eighth century, Buddhism religion is a part of many aspects of Tibetan life. So due to its geographical isolation, Tibet remained mostly untouched by secular influences for many years, and therefore the cultural and political life was largely centred on that faith. It was a country of its own, with its own language, flag, and currency, The Dalai lama who is considered a reincarnation of an enlightened being from Buddhist teachings, acted as a spiritual and political leader for the people. (Stock, 2014). This changed in the 1950s, when Chinese communists invaded Tibet. The Dalai Lama signed a 17-point agreement, which allowed China to control Tibet's internal security and foreign policy while the Lhasa government, led by the Dalai lama, controlled domestic matters (Heinrichs, 1997). However, this agreement ultimately served as a way Chinese took full control of Tibet. Hence, the Chinese occupation of Tibet significantly influenced, individual lives but also religious state relationship within Tibetan society.
When the republic of China was established in 1912, it introduced its first constitution, which explicitly stated that Tibet was one of its 22 provinces. The constitution and other laws formulated after, all stipulate that Tibet was a part of the Republic of China. (Embassy of the People's Republic of China in the Republic of South Africa, 2009). However, until Chinese troops entered the country in 1949, Tibet "governed itself without foreign influence, conducted its own foreign affairs, had its own army and operated its own postal system. Tibet enjoyed de facto recognition by its neighbour states as well as by Great Britain, with whom Tibet entered into a series of treaties regarding travel and trade". ( Canada Tibet Committee, 2021). This situation changed after Chinese invasion in 1950, forcing the 17-point agreement on the Tibetans on the 23 May 1951. (Kelly, 1999). "The argument meant that the Chinese would control Tibet's internal security and foreign policy, while the Lhasa government under the Dalai lama would largely control domestic matters." (Ryan, 2009). Following the agreement, the nation of Tibet was significantly affected as Chinese influence grew over the region.
When Buddhism became the dominant religion in Tibet and the people had religious freedom, approximately two-thirds of the population were monastic, living in numerous monasteries and nunneries, some of which housed thousands of monks. Most families sent at least one child to the monasteries, which provided a traditional way of life. "Lay people either lived in towns and small villages or lived as wandering nomads who grazed their livestock. Buddhism was integral to their lifestyle too, and many lay people were deeply religious." (Farrer-Halls, 1998). In an account by author Lowell Thomas Jr about his journey to the Dalai Lamas throne in Lhasa states that "Every Tibetan prays. Even five-year-old children commit long prayers to memory. The Monk prays hours on end daily, but the layman, too, often devotes two or three hours each day to prayer and meditation" (Jr, 1951). The 7th point in the agreement specifically, states that "The religious beliefs, customs and habits of the Tibetan people shall be respected, and lama monasteries shall be protected." (Central Tibetan Administration, 2019). However, this promise by China was not fulfilled but rather violated as, within a few years, the Chinese government effectively ended the dominance of monks and monasteries in Tibet. Thousands of monks were executed of arrested, and monasteries and temples across the nation were looted or destroyed. Of the 2,500 monasteries that existed in 1959 only 70 remained by 1962. A 97 percent reduction in less than three years. (Schaik, 2013). These Buddhist monasteries were essential components of Tibetan villages and where homes to a quarter of the population (Farrer-Halls, 1998), and vital institutions within Tibetan pastoral regions. (Samuel, 2012). They functioned as "universities, art museums, charitable foundations, landlords, and lending institutions." (Heinrichs, 1997) The destruction of these institutions hindered the teachings of Buddhist teachings and practices, leading to significant losses in education, cultural and spiritual aspects that were important to Tibetan society. In 1950s the Chinese then implemented schools "in central Tibet, both in cities and in rural areas. In Lhasa, the first state school was established in 1952. The teaching was in Tibetan, but the content was heavily influenced by Chinese communist propaganda" (Buffetrille & Tourbadre, 2022). This change in education likely led to younger people having different beliefs and practices. The Chinese government control over education could have helped them to control the population by spreading their communist ideology. The schools changed how Buddhism was understand and practised which also affecting society as a whole in Tibet.
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Demonstrating understanding
6/6Analysing
6/7Evaluating and drawing conclusions
7/7Investigation
Year 12 Study of Religion · 8 submissions
| Student | Submitted | Grade | Status |
|---|---|---|---|
| Oliver Marsh | Mon 9:12am | 21/25 | Approved |
| Ethan Brooks | Mon 9:40am | 18/25 | Approved |
| Sam Wright | Mon 10:03am | 23/25 | Needs Review |
| Lena Kovac | Mon 11:20am | 15/25 | Approved |
| Zara Hassan | Mon 1:15pm | 20/25 | Approved |
| Grace Lin | Mon 2:48pm | 19/25 | Needs Review |
| Priya Sharma | Tue 8:30am | 24/25 | Approved |
| Noah Patel | Tue 9:05am | 16/25 | Approved |
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Investigate how Buddhism interacted with the state in Tibet in the 1950s and 1960s.
Buddhism shaped Tibetan society and its leadership. The occupation changed how Buddhism was practised. Monasteries lost much of their influence.
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Instructions
25 marksExplain how a religious tradition has interacted with a nation-state, and evaluate the effect on its followers.
Response
Buddhism in Tibet was closely tied to political life before 1950, with the Dalai Lama as both spiritual and political leader.
After 1950 the state restricted monasteries and religious education, which changed how followers could practise their faith in public.
Many followers kept their practice alive in exile communities, showing that the tradition adapted rather than disappeared.
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Instructions
25 marksExplain how a religious tradition has interacted with a nation-state, and evaluate the effect on its followers.
Response
Buddhism in Tibet was closely tied to political life before 1950, with the Dalai Lama as both spiritual and political leader.
After 1950 the state restricted monasteries and religious education, which changed how followers could practise their faith in public.
Many followers kept their practice alive in exile communities, showing that the tradition adapted rather than disappeared.
| StudentSearch students | Teacher 2 | Teacher 3 | You | Edexia | Final | Spread | ||
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Student 471 | 18/25 | 19/25 | 19/25 | 19/25 | 19/25 | 1 | ||
Student 128 | 15/25 | 16/25 | 15/25 | 15/25 | 15/25 | 1 | ||
Student 305 | 20/25 | 14/25 | 21/25 | 20/25 | 19/25 | 7 | ||
Student 219 | 22/25 | 21/25 | 22/25 | 22/25 | 22/25 | 1 | ||
Student 064 | 12/25 | 15/25 | 13/25 | 13/25 | 13/25 | 3 | ||
Student 092 | 20/25 | 20/25 | 21/25 | 20/25 | 20/25 | 1 |
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25 marksExplain how a religious tradition has interacted with a nation-state, and evaluate the effect on its followers.
Response
The relationship between Tibetan Buddhism and the state shifted from partnership to control during the 1950s and 1960s.
State policy reduced the number of monks and limited public ritual, so practice moved into homes and exile communities.
This interaction strengthened a sense of shared identity among followers, even as it weakened the tradition's institutions inside Tibet.
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Strengths
- •Knowledge of the content:Most students explain how Buddhism interacted with the state accurately across the last three tasks.
- •Clear structure:Responses are organised around clear topic sentences.
Areas to Improve
- •Using sources and evidence:Students make claims without sources or statistics to support them.→Set a short task where every claim needs one source.
- •Linking to the question:Paragraphs explain the content well but don't return to the question.→Ask students to end each paragraph with a sentence that answers the question directly.
- •Evaluation:Few responses weigh strengths against limitations or reach a judgement.→Model a final paragraph that makes and justifies a judgement.
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Activity Analytics
Overall
Strengths
- •Students explain how Buddhism interacted with the state clearly.
Areas to Improve
- •Few responses reach a supported judgement.→Add a judgement sentence to every extended response this week.
Analysing
Strengths
- •Accurate explanations of the key concept.
Evaluating and drawing conclusions
Areas to Improve
- •Most of the class lost marks here by making claims without sources or statistics.→Have students rewrite one paragraph with a specific piece of evidence and a sentence explaining it.
| Name | Activities | Practice | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Ethan B. | ethan.b@riverside.edu.au | 6/6 | 3 |
| Grace L. | grace.l@riverside.edu.au | 6/6 | 7 |
| Lena K. | lena.k@riverside.edu.au | 5/6 | 2 |
| Noah P. | noah.p@riverside.edu.au | 6/6 | 5 |
| Oliver M. | oliver.m@riverside.edu.au | 4/6 | 1 |
| Priya S. | priya.s@riverside.edu.au | 6/6 | 4 |
| Sam W. | sam.w@riverside.edu.au | 5/6 | 0 |
| Zara H. | zara.h@riverside.edu.au | 6/6 | 6 |
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Student Analysis
Strengths
- •Knowledge of the content:Explains how Buddhism interacted with the state accurately.
Areas to Improve
- •Using evidence:Makes accurate claims without supporting them.→Back every claim with one source.
- •Explaining evidence:Quotes evidence but doesn't say how it supports the point.→Follow each piece of evidence with a sentence on what it shows.
Syllabus
- Unit 1: Ideas in the modern world
- Unit 2: Movements in the modern world
- Unit 3: National experiences in the modern world
- Unit 4: International experiences in the modern world
- Unit 1: Sacred texts and religious writings
- Unit 2: Religion and ritual
- Unit 3: Religious ethics
- Unit 4: Religion, rights and the nation-state
- Unit 1: Beyond reasonable doubt
- Unit 2: Balance of probabilities
- Unit 3: Law, governance and change
- Unit 4: Human rights in legal contexts
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